Thanks.
Regarding the first comment, the abstract can be elaborated a little more as
follows:
This document defines the requirements for Distributed Mobility
Management (DMM) at the network layer. The hierarchical structure in
traditional wireless networks has led primarily to centrally deployed
mobility anchors. As some wireless networks are evolving away from
the hierarchical structure, it can be useful have a distributed model
for mobility management in which traffic does not need to traverse
centrally deployed mobility anchors far from the optimal route.
Regarding the second comments on defining the acronyms:
It appears there are 3 such instances: EPC, 3GPP, WLAN. All other acronyms have
been properly defined.
EPC needs to be spelled out before the acronym appears.
3GPP was spelled out in Section 3.1 but was also used in Section 1. It needs to
move to Section 1.
WLAN is also spelled out.
H Anthony Chan
From: Russ Housley
Sent: Monday, February 10, 2014 1:51 PM
To: draft-ietf-dmm-requirements....@tools.ietf.org
Cc: IESG ; IETF Gen-ART
Subject: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-dmm-requirements-14
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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-dmm-requirements-14
Reviewer: Russ Housley
Review Date: 2014-02-10
IETF LC End Date: 2014-02-17
IESG Telechat date: Unknown
Summary: Ready for publication.
Major Concerns: None.
Minor Concerns: None.
Other Comments:
I think that the Abstract could be more polished. Some mention of the
anchor point seems desirable.
Spell out acronyms the first time they are used. EPC is an example that
needs to be expanded.
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