Francis, Jari - thanks for your reviews.  I will address those editorial issues 
in the next revision of the draft.

- Ralph

On Jun 10, 2014, at 3:37 AM 6/10/14, Jari Arkko <jari.ar...@ericsson.com> wrote:

> Thanks for your review. I have also reviewed the document.
> 
> Jari
> 
> On 02 Jun 2014, at 15:46, Francis Dupont <francis.dup...@fdupont.fr> wrote:
> 
>> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
>> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
>> 
>> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
>> 
>> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
>> you may receive.
>> 
>> Document: draft-ietf-6man-multicast-scopes-05.txt
>> Reviewer: Francis Dupont
>> Review Date: 20140530
>> IETF LC End Date: 20140530
>> IESG Telechat date: unknown
>> 
>> Summary: Ready
>> 
>> Major issues: None
>> 
>> Minor issues: None
>> 
>> Nits/editorial comments:
>> (only editorial stuff in the case they are not caught by the RFC Editor)
>> 
>> - 2 NEW page 4: contraint -> constraint
>> 
>> - 7 page 5: missing final dot
>> 
>> - Author's Address page 6: US -> USA
>> 
>> Thanks
>> 
>> francis.dup...@fdupont.fr
>> 
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