Hi, Thanks for your comments. The updated draft based on your comments shall be submitted after all the comments from the Last call, which ends on Monday, June 30.
Thanks Mouli I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-eman-energy-aware-mib-15 Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani Review Date: Jun-23-2014 IETF LC End Date: Jun-30-2014 IESG Telechat date: Not known. This document is ready as a Proposed Standard. A couple of nits can be fixed; more information below. Major: 0 Minor: 0 Nits: 2 Nits - S4, third paragraph: s/and secondly on identification, context/on identification, and context/ - S5.4, third paragraph: spacing appears to be off since the relation- ships appear distended to the left, beyond the margin. Thanks, - vijay -- Vijay K. Gurbani, Bell Laboratories, Alcatel-Lucent 1960 Lucent Lane, Rm. 9C-533, Naperville, Illinois 60563 (USA) Email: vkg@{bell-labs.com,acm.org} / vijay.gurb...@alcatel-lucent.com<mailto:vijay.gurb...@alcatel-lucent.com> Web: http://ect.bell-labs.com/who/vkg/ | Calendar: http://goo.gl/x3Ogq
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