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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-oauth-saml2-bearer-21 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2014-09-29 IETF LC End Date: 2014-09-29 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC . Nits/editorial comments: Nits: -Abstract, please consider smelling out Security Assertion Markup Language -[Page 4] Section 2.1 ",use an access ..", it would be clearer to name the entity (AS?) who would have to "use and access token...". -[Page 5] Section 2.2 ", use the following parameter", same comment as above. Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com
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