I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-forces-packet-parallelization-02.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20140930 IETF LC End Date: 20140929 IESG Telechat date: 20141002 Summary: Ready with nits Major issues: none Minor issues: none Nits/editorial comments: - Abstract page 1: the FE abbrev should be introduced (in particular one can believe it means ForCES Element in place of Forwarding Element) - ToC page 2 and 6 page 23: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - 1 page 3: the ForCES abbrev must be introduced again (the Abstract is not a part of the document for this) - 1 page 3: same for LFB - 1 page 3 and 2 page 6: modelling -> modeling - 1 page 3 (multiple), 2 page 5 (twice) and 9.2 page 26 : Cilc -> Cilk (BTW the reference and wikipedia say Cilk :-) - 1 page 3: bad wording: "Being an experimental document the LFB Class IDs cannot be included..." - 1.2 page 3: FE itself should be in the list (likely the first item) - 1.2 page 3: same for CE... - 2 page 5: e.g. -> e.g., - 2.1 page 8, 4.3.3 page 15 and 5 page 17: (not a US vs UK sp!) LFBParallelOccurenceLimit -> LFBParallelOccurrenceLimit - 4.2.2 page 14: what is the MergeWaitTimeoutTimer unit? (if the answer is not trivial it should be added in the document) - 8 page 25: parallezation -> parallelization - Authors' Addresses: please add USA (not US as postal addresses require country names, not ISO IS 3166 codes (BTW VA is a valid 3166 code but English is not one of its official languages even wikipedia doesn't seem to have a very clear idea about them :-)). Regards francis.dup...@fdupont.fr _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
