thanks for your review! On 27 Oct 2014, at 08:05, Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazip...@ericsson.com> wrote:
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, > please see the FAQ at http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq. > > Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may > receive. > > Document: draft-ietf-l3vpn-mvpn-mldp-nlri-06 > Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour > Review Date: 2014-10-27 > IETF LC End Date: 2014-10-27 > IESG Telechat date: NA > > > Summary: > This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some > comments . > > > Nits/editorial comments: > Nits: > -[Page 3] Section 1, "an SP may"---->"a SP may" > -[Page 3] Section 1," "Subsequent Address Family" (SAFI)"---->" "Subsequent > Address Family Identifier" (SAFI)" > -[Page 3] Section 1, "Forwarding Equivalance"---->"Forwarding Equivalence" > -[Page 5] PMSI first use not spelled out (P-Multicast Service Interface) > Tunnel > -[Page 6], "of these route"---->"of these routes" or "of these route types" > -[Page 8], "the the NLRI"---->"the NLRI" > -[Page 8] Range 0x41-0x7f, why not Range 0x40-0x7f ? > 0x40-0x42 is specified as reserved. (should it be Range 0x43-0x7f ?) > > -[Page 11] References, [BGP-ERR] has a new revision (rfc editor should review > the work in progress versions) > > Best Regards, > Meral > --- > Meral Shirazipour > Ericsson > Research > www.ericsson.com > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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