I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-tsvwg-sctp-dtls-encaps-07.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20141224 IETF LC End Date: 20141224 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: 5 page 4: in "its lower layer should provide this" the term "should" is ambiguous, i.e., either it is a keyword and SHOULD is better, or it is not and a different word should be used. Note I don't know the authors' intention so the best solution. Regards francis.dup...@fdupont.fr _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
