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Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-gmpls-general-constraints-ospf-te-09.txt
Reviewer: Suresh Krishnan
Review Date: 2015/03/02
IESG Telechat date: 2015/03/05
Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard, but
I do have some comments you may wish to address.
Minor:
* Section 5
Isn't separating static and dynamic info of the same TE link another
method of scaling? (e.g. encoding the Port Label Restrictions sub-TLV
into a separate top level link TLV and advertising in a separate LSA)
If so, suggest adding a subsection here to describe it.
* Security Considerations:
I have an uneasy (potentially unjustified) feeling about the lack of any
specific security considerations for the Connectivity Matrix sub-TLV. It
looks pretty compute intensive to me. Somebody should probably take a
look at the DoS possibilities with a multiple complex decomposed
Connectivity Matrices.
* IANA Considerations:
Looking at the IANA registry, the Sub-TLVs do not have the text sub-TLV
tag attached to them. Suggest renaming to
OLD:
TBD1 | Connectivity Matrix sub-TLV | [This.I-D]
NEW:
TBD1 | Connectivity Matrix | [This.I-D]
OLD:
TBD2 | Port Label Restrictions sub-TLV | [This.I-D]
NEW:
TBD2 | Port Label Restrictions | [This.I-D]
Thanks
Suresh
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