>> 
>> Now you are right that the introduction does use "updates" in the prose for 
>> 5546 and 4791. Perhaps it would be better to use "clarifies use of" for 5546 
>> and "extends" for 4791. So I am proposing the following change:
>> 
>>     It updates iCalendar [RFC5545], xCal [RFC6321], and jCal
>>     [RFC7265], to extend the "RRULE" property definition.
>> 
>>     It clarifies use of iTIP [RFC5546] to specify how the extended "RRULE"
>>     property should be handled in iTIP messages.
>> 
>>     It extends CalDAV [RFC4791] to specify how the extended "RRULE"
>>     property can be supported by CalDAV servers and clients.
>> 
>> Would that be better?
> I think so.

This works for me as well.

I am assuming the sponsoring AD will ensure that the changes get implemented in 
the draft before the RFC Editor takes it over. I have balloted No-Obj for this 
draft in tonight’s IESG telechat.

Jari

P.S. Many thanks for your review, Robert!

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