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Document: draft-klensin-smtp-521code-05.txt
    SMTP 521 and 556 Reply Codes
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 12-March-2015
IETF LC End Date: 2-April-2015
IESG Telechat date: 9-April-2015

Summary: This document is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard.

Major issues:

Minor issues:
The description of the 556 reply code in section 4 seems to switch between refering to the generating entity as a client and as a sesrver. I presume this is because the actual sitaution is an SMTP server is trying to pass information onwards, and in that onwards direction it is a client which. But it is still confusing for an SMTP client to make a determination and then an SMTP server which is apparently the same entity to generate the rror code to some other SMPT client.

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