Thank you very much for your review, Francis. Jari
On 22 Mar 2015, at 22:49, Francis Dupont <francis.dup...@fdupont.fr> wrote: > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Please wait for direction from your document shepherd > or AD before posting a new version of the draft. > > Document: draft-ietf-ccamp-wson-signaling-09.txt > Reviewer: Francis Dupont > Review Date: 20150313 > IETF LC End Date: 20150318 > IESG Telechat date: unknown > > Summary: Ready > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: None > > Nits/editorial comments: > I read the 09 version but was too busy to prepare the IETF meeting > to send these few comments. Note I know the 10 version is available > so I adjusted by comments (i.e., I don't raise concerns about removed > or improved texts :-). > > - 2 page 4 (end node): e.g. -> e.g., > > (it seems the very few other comments no longer apply! :-) > > Thanks > > francis.dup...@fdupont.fr > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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