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For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-cdni-media-type-03.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20151002 IETF LC End Date: 20151013 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - In 1 page 2: the CDNI abbrev should be introduced (i.e., the Abstract is considered as independent). Note that formally CDN and JSON abbrevs should be introduced too but IMHO it is no necessary here. - 2.1 page 3: RFCthis -> this RFC - 3.1 page 5: the Nits checker complains the RFC2119 reference is unused. BTW I saw the 04 version was published (without problematic changes rom 03). Regards francis.dup...@fdupont.fr _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
