(belated) thanks for the review and the fixes. the document is on tomorrow’s IESG telechat and i have balloted no-objection.
jari On 04 Jun 2015, at 19:55, Hannes Gredler <han...@juniper.net> wrote: > alexey, > > thanks for your comments - have incorporated them - diff is here: > https://github.com/hannesgredler/draft-ietf-idr-ls-distribution/commit/4c5e120d9679006f553320928ba867ed9612c41f > > /hannes > > On Sun, May 10, 2015 at 08:51:04PM +0100, Adrian Farrel wrote: > | Link: [1]File-List > | > | Forwarding on behalf of Alexey. > | > | > | > | From: Alexey Melnikov [mailto:alexey.melni...@isode.com] > | Sent: 10 May 2015 17:22 > | To: adr...@olddog.co.uk > | Subject: Fwd: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of > | draft-ietf-idr-ls-distribution-10 > | > | > | > | Hi Adrian, > | I am having some problems with the tools.ietf.org alias expansion. Can > you > | forward to your co-editors? > | > | -------- Original Message -------- > | > | Subject: [Gen-art] Gen-ART telechat review of > | draft-ietf-idr-ls-distribution-10 > | Date: Sun, 10 May 2015 17:18:12 +0100 > | From: Alexey Melnikov [2]<alexey.melni...@isode.com> > | To: [3]draft-ietf-idr-ls-distribution....@tools.ietf.org, General > | Area Review Team [4]<gen-art@ietf.org> > | > | > | > | [Resending] > | > | > | > | I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on > | > | Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at > | > | [5]< http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > | > | > | > | Please wait for direction from your document shepherd > | > | or AD before posting a new version of the draft. > | > | > | > | Document: draft-ietf-idr-ls-distribution-10.txt > | > | Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov > | > | Review Date: 2015-05-10 > | > | IETF LC End Date: 2015-04-08 > | > | IESG Telechat date: N/A > | > | > | > | My apologies for the late review of this document. > | > | > | > | Summary: Ready with nits > | > | > | > | > | > | Minor (but some of these might be more serious): > | > | > | > | In 6.2.2: > | > | > | > | If an implementation of BGP-LS detects a malformed attribute, then it > | > | SHOULD use the 'Attribute Discard' action as per > | > | [I-D.ietf-idr-error-handling] Section 2. > | > | > | > | This needs to be a Normative reference. Or you can keep it as > | > | Informative, if you change the sentence not to use RFC 2119 language. > | > | > | > | In 3.3.1.1 - does this need a new IANA registry? (I am fine if you think > | > | you don't). > | > | > | > | In 3.3.1.3/3.3.2.7 - what is "subset of the FQDN"? > | > | > | > | In 3.3.2.3: > | > | > | > | The TE Default Metric TLV carries the TE-metric for this link. > | > | The length of this TLV is fixed at 4 octets. > | > | > | > | I am probably showing my ignorance, but is the term "TE-metric" defined > | > | somewhere? The description below suggests it has substructure, which I > | > | don't know anything about. > | > | > | > | If a source protocol (e.g. > | > | IS-IS) does not support a Metric width of 32 bits then the high > | > | order octet MUST be set to zero. > | > | > | > | Best Regards, > | > | Alexey > | > | > | > | _______________________________________________ > | > | Gen-art mailing list > | > | [6]Gen-art@ietf.org > | > | [7]https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art > | > | > | > | > | > | References > | > | Visible links > | 1. > file:///var/folders/cf/mshm9h8557j_j4kxtypy1gx80000gn/T/cid:filelist.xml@01D08B62.75F17A40 > | 2. mailto:alexey.melni...@isode.com > | 3. mailto:draft-ietf-idr-ls-distribution....@tools.ietf.org > | 4. mailto:gen-art@ietf.org > | 5. http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq > | 6. mailto:Gen-art@ietf.org > | 7. https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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