Hi Francis, Thanks for your feedback. I will address all your nits.
Regards, Ram -----Original Message----- From: Francis Dupont <francis.dup...@fdupont.fr> Date: Wednesday, 18 November 2015 at 1:37 PM To: "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org> Cc: "draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-dtls-srtp....@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-dtls-srtp....@ietf.org> Subject: review of draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-dtls-srtp-08.txt >I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed >by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just >like any other last call comments. > >For more information, please see the FAQ at > ><http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > >Document: draft-ietf-straw-b2bua-dtls-srtp-08.txt >Reviewer: Francis Dupont >Review Date: 20151112 >IETF LC End Date: 20151117 >IESG Telechat date: 20151203 > >Summary: Ready > >Major issues: None > >Minor issues: None > >Nits/editorial comments: > (very minor) > - 3.1.1 figure 1 page 5: a= fingerprint1 -> a=fingerprint1 > > - 7 page 9: comments,suggestions, -> comments, suggestions, > > - Authors' Addresses page 11: as the first two authors work at > the same place one can expect exactly the same address (:-) > >Regards > >francis.dup...@fdupont.fr _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
