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Document: draft-ietf-xrblock-rtcp-xr-video-lc-05
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 2015/12/14
IETF LC End Date: 2015-12-04
IESG Telechat date: (if known) 2015-12-17
Summary: Ready with nits, primarily a number of acronyms needing expansion.
Major issues:
None
Minor issues:
None
Nits/editorial comments:
Abstract: Need to expand RTCP (to RTP Control Protocol) and XR (Extended
Reports).
s1, para 2: Need to expand QoE.
s1.2: s/RTP Monitoring Architectures [RFC6792]/RTP Monitoring Framework
[RFC6792]/
s1.3:
OLD
These metrics are applicable to video applications the video
component of Audio/Video applications using RTP and applying packet
loss concealment mechanisms which are incorporated into the receiving
endpoint to mitigate the impact of network impairments on QoE.
NEW:
These metrics are applicable to video applications and the video
component of Audio/Video applications using RTP that apply packet
loss concealment mechanisms incorporated into the receiving
endpoint to mitigate the impact of network impairments on QoE.
END
s1.3: Need to expand IPTV.
s3, item b: Need to expand IDR;
s/Using inter-frame extrapolation/Using the
inter-frame extrapolation/
s3, item d: s/so that receiver/so that the receiver/
s3, last para: s/methods slightly different/methods to be slightly
different/
s4, para 1: Need to expand SSRC.
s4, duration fields: It would useful to insert a reference to the place
where the RTP timestamp units are defined.
s7.1: should refer back to s4 for the definition of VLC.
s7.2: should refer back to s5 for the definition of video-loss-concealment.
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