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Document: draft-ietf-core-block-19
Reviewer: Jouni Korhonen
Review Date: 4/18/2016
IETF LC End Date: 4/12/2016
IESG Telechat date: 4/21/2016
Summary: Ready with nits
Major issues: none.
Minor issues:
* The intoduction mentions that the block transfwer can be used for
random access. This is not separately described anywhere in the
documents. Although the operation is more or less trivial I would
appreciate an example or some text there because the Block2 overloads
the NUM value 0 with special meaning (for the cases where the first ever
accessed block is not the block number 0).
Nits/editorial comments:
* There are few issues with capitalization (e.g., section vs Section),
which I believe the RFC Editor will handle without me pointing at them.
* The document has a tendency of using long portions of text inside
braces, sometimes even in a middle of a paragraph. I would strongly
suggest either making those part of the normal text flow or a separate
(intended) editor's note if they for some reason cannot be part of the
normal text flow.
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