Yes, thank you, those edits address my concern quite nicely.
Yours,
Joel
On 5/9/16 4:48 AM, thomas.mo...@orange.com wrote:
Hi Jari, Joel,
2016-05-05, Jari Arkko:
Thanks for your review. Authors, did you note Joel’s suggestion?
Yes, noted and taken into account (hopefully in a satisfying way)
in version -06, uploaded one minute ago.
Best,
-Thomas
On 28 Mar 2016, at 08:08, Joel M. Halpern <j...@joelhalpern.com> wrote:
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.
For more information, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Document: draft-ietf-bess-multicast-damping-04
Multicast VPN state damping
Reviewer: Joel M. Halpern
Review Date: 28-March-2016
IETF LC End Date: 13-April-2016
IESG Telechat date: N/A
Summary: This document is ready for publication as a proposed standard
Major issues:
Minor issues:
Nits/editorial comments:
Given that section 6.2 says that this applies to Ethernet VPNs
[RFC7117], it would seem useful to mention this in the introduction.
_______________________________________________
Gen-art mailing list
Gen-art@ietf.org
https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Ce message et ses pieces jointes peuvent contenir des informations
confidentielles ou privilegiees et ne doivent donc
pas etre diffuses, exploites ou copies sans autorisation. Si vous avez
recu ce message par erreur, veuillez le signaler
a l'expediteur et le detruire ainsi que les pieces jointes. Les messages
electroniques etant susceptibles d'alteration,
Orange decline toute responsabilite si ce message a ete altere, deforme
ou falsifie. Merci.
This message and its attachments may contain confidential or privileged
information that may be protected by law;
they should not be distributed, used or copied without authorisation.
If you have received this email in error, please notify the sender and
delete this message and its attachments.
As emails may be altered, Orange is not liable for messages that have
been modified, changed or falsified.
Thank you.
_______________________________________________
Gen-art mailing list
Gen-art@ietf.org
https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
