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Document: draft-ietf-insipid-session-id-26.txt
Reviewer: Elwyn Davies
Review Date: 2016/08/12
IETF LC End Date: 2016/08/04
IESG Telechat date: 2016/08/18
Summary: (2nd Last Call and Telechat) Almost ready. The points from my
review of -24 in the first Last Call have all been addressed - thanks -
with the exception of the location of the key definitions of "session
id" and "communication session". The latest version (-26) refers the
reader to RFC 7206 which needs to be a normative reference but is an
Informational RFC, creating a downref. I cannot see that a
requirements document meets the criteria for an allowable downref as
described in Section 2 of RFC 3967. Reproducing the two definitions in
the new draft (and ensuring that they are accurate for the standards
document) seems to be a better solution IMO.
Major issues:
None
Minor issues:
Downref to RFC 7206 - see above.
Editorial/Nits:
Missing definitions of "session id" and "communication session" - see above.
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