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This draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC. I have only two small editorial comments: Figure 2 appears to be missing a couple of backslashes in the ASCII art drawing. The sentence "This document has been written to address errata in a previous version of this standard.” probably ought to be moved to section 2. A broader statement in the Abstract to the effect that this document is a rewrite of RFC 4447 for publication as an Internet Standard might be more helpful. - Ralph _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
