I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-manet-credit-window-07 Credit Windowing extension for DLEP Reviewer: Lucy Yong Review Date: 28-Nov-2016 IETF LC End Date: 28-Nov-2016 IESG Telechat date: 29-Nov-2016 Summary: This document specifies a technique for a fine-grained flow control in radio communication. It is well-written and ready for publishing. Note: 07 version is published recently and is reviewed. Major issues: N/A Minor issues: N/A Nits/editorial comments: In section 9.1, revise "If credits are to used on a destination, ...", to make it readable. Regards, Lucy
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