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Document: draft-murchison-webdav-prefer-13
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 13 Jan 2016
IETF LC End Date: 16 January 2017
IESG Telechat date: 19 January 2017
Summary: Ready with nits
This is a well written document with two minor editorial issues
remaining from the version previously reviewed.
Issues:
From ID-nits:
-- The draft header indicates that this document updates RFC7240,
but the abstract doesn't seem to mention this, which it should.
Specifically I think the nits checker is looking to see RFC724O
called up in the Abstract.
=========
It says in section 5
5. Implementation Status
< RFC Editor: before publication please remove this section, the
reference to [RFC7942], and any "URIs" section >
I think you ned the whole of section 9.3 to be deleted. If that is so
it would be clearer to the editor to say so.
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