The HTML file updated in place. Thanks Weijun
> On Jan 27, 2018, at 10:12 AM, Greg Hudson <ghud...@mit.edu> wrote: > > On 01/23/2018 06:43 PM, Weijun Wang wrote: >> I've uploaded an updated version at >> >> >> http://cr.openjdk.java.net/~weijun/rfc5653bis/draft-ietf-kitten-rfc5653bis-07.html > > This is a great format for reviewing these changes; thanks for > generating it. > > Line 416 does not capitalize "optional" in "optional services", but > lines 385 and 391 do. > > Lines 422 and 424 should probably capitalize "should". Line 429 should > probably capitalize "may". > > At line 598, I would lean towards leaving "MUST" in lowercase as we are > describing an application requirement, not prescribing one. > > Line 1174, I would leave "MAY" in lowercase. > > Line 1229, "may" should probably be capitalized. > > Line 1369, I would leave "MAY" alone as this seems more descriptive than > prescriptive. > > Line 3221's use of "SHOULD" is prescriptive, but there's no other way to > request the default QOP. So I would leave it lowercase (or change the > wording, but I'm not trying to open any more cans of worms). > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
