Stewart, thanks for your review. I entered a No Objection ballot. Alissa
> On Mar 2, 2018, at 3:25 PM, Stewart Bryant <stewart.bry...@gmail.com> wrote: > > Reviewer: Stewart Bryant > Review result: Ready with Issues > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your > document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-trill-transport-over-mpls-07 > Reviewer: Stewart Bryant > Review Date: 2018-03-02 > IETF LC End Date: 2018-03-06 > IESG Telechat date: 2018-03-08 > > Summary: An understandable document. The only comment of note is the > conflation > of PW headers and MPLS headers. There are a couple of easy to fix nits. > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: > > 6. Packet Processing Between Pseudowires > > In this section you conflate PW headers and MPLS headers. > The PW label is a type of MPLS label, although it has its own forwarding > instruction, but the control word is not part of MPLS. > > Nits/editorial comments: > > There is an ASCII art error in Fig 1 on the line containing Tenant1 Site1 > > The terms PE device and PE router seem to be used interchangeably. Is this an > error, or are they distinct devices. > > The VTSD must be capable of forming TRILL adjacency with the > SB> Should be "forming a TRILL adjacency" > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
