Many thanks, Matthew. This will be fixed in the next update of the draft, already fixed in bitbucket.
Take care, Pascal > -----Original Message----- > From: Matthew Miller <[email protected]> > Sent: jeudi 25 octobre 2018 20:02 > To: [email protected] > Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; draft-ietf-detnet-problem- > [email protected] > Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-detnet-problem-statement-07 > > Reviewer: Matthew Miller > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for > the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call > comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: > Reviewer: Matthew A. Miller > Review Date: 2018-10-25 > IETF LC End Date: 2018-10-03 > IESG Telechat date: N/A > > Summary: > > Ready to publish as an Informational Draft, though there are nits that ought > to > be addressed before publication. > > Major issues: NONE > > Minor issues: NONE > > Nits/editorial comments: > > * In Section 3.1. "Supported topologies" paragraph 2, the word "an" > should be "an" in the phrase "a tunnel between and ingress and an egress > router". > > * In Section 3.1. "Supported topologies" paragraph 2, the word "of" > should be "or" in the phrase "... the path is end-to-end of a tunnel.". > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
