Russ, thanks for your review. Vishnu, thanks for your responses. I entered a No Objection ballot.
Alissa > On Dec 10, 2018, at 4:49 PM, Russ Housley <[email protected]> wrote: > > Yes, those changes resolve my comments. > > Russ > > >> On Dec 10, 2018, at 12:57 AM, Vishnu Pavan Beeram <[email protected] >> <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: >> >> Russ, Hi! >> >> Much Thanks for the review! We just posted a new rev (-07) to address your >> comments. Please do go through the diffs >> (https://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-mpls-rsvp-shared-labels-07.txt >> >> <https://tools.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-mpls-rsvp-shared-labels-07.txt>) >> and let us know if the new version adequately addresses your concern. >> >> The term "loose hop" was introduced in RFC3209. So we just added a reference >> to it in the relevant sentence. >> >> Regards, >> -Pavan (on behalf of the authors) >> >> On Fri, Nov 30, 2018 at 1:29 PM Russ Housley <[email protected] >> <mailto:[email protected]>> wrote: >> Reviewer: Russ Housley >> Review result: Ready >> >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area >> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed >> by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just >> like any other last call comments. >> >> For more information, please see the FAQ at >> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq >> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>>.. >> >> Document: draft-ietf-mpls-rsvp-shared-labels-06 >> Reviewer: Russ Housley >> Review Date: 2018-11-30 >> IETF LC End Date: 2018-12-11 >> IESG Telechat date: unknown >> >> Summary: Ready >> >> >> Major Concerns: >> >> None >> >> >> Minor Concerns: >> >> Section 5.3: To understand this section, I had to learn about "loose >> hops" from other sources. Please consider adding this term to the ones >> that are defined in Section 2. >> >> >> Nits: >> >> Throughout document: s/hop by hop/hop-by-hop/ >> >> Section 5.3.1: s/The net result is that by/As a result, by/ >> >> _______________________________________________ >> mpls mailing list >> [email protected] <mailto:[email protected]> >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/mpls >> <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/mpls> > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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