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>> Example: pn-prid = 00fc13adff78512 >> >> For more information about the APNs Topic and device token: >> >> SB> Is the following part of the example? If so it could usefully be >> delimited >> SB> as such, otherwise, I don't understand why it is not a normal document >> SB> reference. >> >> https://developer.apple.com/library/archive/documentation/NetworkingI >> nternet/Conceptual/RemoteNotificationsPG/CommunicatingwithAPNs.html >> >> SB> Similarly in the following section >> >> The link reference is not part of the example. Perhaps I could place to >> reference before the examples, to make that more clear? >> >> Are you suggesting that I add the link to the reference section, similar to >> document references? > SB> Yes, if it is just a reference, I would have expected it to be treated > just like any other reference, i.e. a pointer to a reference at > the end of the document. That method also clarifies the matter of whether the > reference is normative or informational which does not happen with embedded > references. You don’t need the reference in order to understand the draft. You need the reference if you are going to implement support for a specific PNS. But, I have no problem to add the links to the reference section. Are you aware of any examples of referencing web links? Regards, Christer
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