Reviewer: Russ Housley Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-roll-useofrplinfo-25 Reviewer: Russ Housley Review Date: 2019-04-03 IETF LC End Date: 2019-04-11 IESG Telechat date: unknown Summary: Ready with Nits Major Concerns: None. Minor Concerns: Section 1 says: ... This document clarifies examples that intend to illustrate the result of the normative language in RFC8200 and RFC6553. In other words, the examples are intended to be normative explanation of the results of executing that language. This set the wrong expectation for me. What the document seems to be doing is aligning with the recent normative change in RFC8200. The alignment could lead to a flag day, and this document suggests a way to avoid a flag day. It goes through a whole bunch of use cases to illustrate the updates. Nits: In Table 6, please move some of the whitespace on the right to the first column to avoid so many words being split across lines. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
