Ines:

Thanks for taking the time to review the document.

> Reviewer: Ines Robles
> Review result: Ready
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
> 
> For more information, please see the FAQ at
> 
> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-tls-tls13-cert-with-extern-psk-??
> Reviewer: Ines Robles
> Review Date: 2019-12-02
> IETF LC End Date: 2019-12-02
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary:
> 
> The document is well written.
> 
> This document specifies a TLS 1.3 extension permitting certificate-based 
> server
> authentication to be combined with an external PSK as an input to the TLS 1.3
> key schedule.
> 
> Major issues: Not found
> 
> Minor issues: Not found
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> I think that would be nice to add in IANA Considerations a table specifying 
> the
> fields of the TLS ExtensionType Values indicated in
> https://www.iana.org/assignments/tls-extensiontype-values/tls-extensiontype-values.xhtml
>  
> <https://www.iana.org/assignments/tls-extensiontype-values/tls-extensiontype-values.xhtml>

I am willing to add the table, but I observe that IANA was able to correctly 
add the entry based on the words in the document.  You will see that they have 
assigned the number 33 to this extension.

Russ

_______________________________________________
Gen-art mailing list
Gen-art@ietf.org
https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art

Reply via email to