Hello Vijay Good point. I suggest to add text in the intro that defines the acronym. The proposed modified sentence is; " In particular, 6LoWPAN ND introduces a unicast host Address Registration mechanism that reduces the use of multicast compared to the Duplicate Address Detection (DAD) mechanism defined in IPv6 ND. "
It will show up with the next revision. Many thanks! Pascal > -----Original Message----- > From: Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> > Sent: jeudi 26 décembre 2019 18:41 > To: gen-art@ietf.org > Cc: last-c...@ietf.org; draft-ietf-6lo-ap-nd....@ietf.org; 6...@ietf.org > Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-6lo-ap-nd-12 > > Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the > IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call > comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-6lo-ap-nd-12 > Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani > Review Date: 2019-12-26 > IETF LC End Date: 2020-01-09 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: This I-D is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. > > Major issues: 0. > > Minor issues: 0. > > Nits/editorial comments: 1. > > 1/ Figure 6: Please expand the acronym DAD, this acronym is further used in > S7.1. The expansion will aid in understanding the usage of DAD in S7.1. > > Thanks, > > - vijay > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
