OK. The next submitted revision will include changes resulting from the Gen-ART review. I'm waiting for resolution of SecDir comments before submitting a fresh revision.
Meanwhile, the changes so far are available to view as a diff with -06: https://chucklever.github.io/i-d-rpcrdma-cm-pvt-data/#go.draft-ietf-nfsv4-rpcrdma-cm-pvt-data.diff > On Jan 29, 2020, at 10:35 AM, Suhas Nandakumar <suhasi...@gmail.com> wrote: > > Thanks Chuck for the additional clarification. That helped me to understand > better. > Sorry that I missed it in my reading. > > Yes the suggested changes look great. > > Cheers > Suhas > > On Wed, Jan 29, 2020 at 7:23 AM Chuck Lever <chuck.le...@oracle.com> wrote: > > > On Jan 29, 2020, at 12:03 AM, Suhas Nandakumar <suhasi...@gmail.com> wrote: > > > > Thanks Chuck for the response. Please see inline > > > >> On Tue, Jan 28, 2020 at 7:52 AM Chuck Lever <chuck.le...@oracle.com> wrote: > >> > >> Zero is a permitted value for the size fields. Section 5.2 explains how > >> to compute the actual buffer size. If those fields contain zero, the > >> actual send and receive buffer sizes would be 1024 octets. > > > > > > [Suhas] I am not sure if i am reading it right here. Section 5.2 would > > result in the > > value of -1 if the min of the values is Zero (0/1024 - 1). Isn't it so ? > > Section 5.2 says: > > Inline threshold sizes from 1KB to 256KB can be represented in the > Send Size and Receive Size fields. A sender computes the encoded > value by dividing the actual value by 1024 and subtracting one from > the result. A receiver decodes this value by performing a > complementary set of operations. > > Here, "actual value" means the real size of the buffer. A 1024-octet > buffer would result in (1024 / 1024) - 1 = 0. > > The computation done by the receiver is the inverse: > > (0 + 1) * 1024 = 1024 > > I could replace "actual value" by "buffer size, in octets". Would it > help if the text also spelled out the inverse computation? > > > -- > Chuck Lever > > > -- Chuck Lever _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
