Thanks Ragnar, for the quick answer. See in-line.
Regards, Dan On Thu, Feb 27, 2020 at 6:56 PM Ragnar Sundblad <ra...@netnod.se> wrote: > > Hi Dan, > > Thank you for reviewing! > > On 26 Feb 2020, at 11:06, Dan Romascanu via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> > wrote: > > > > Reviewer: Dan Romascanu > > Review result: Ready with Issues > > > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > > like any other last call comments. > > > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > > > Document: draft-ietf-ntp-using-nts-for-ntp-22 > > Reviewer: Dan Romascanu > > Review Date: 2020-02-26 > > IETF LC End Date: 2020-02-28 > > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > > > Summary: > > > > Ready with one minor issue to be discussed. > > > > A very clear, well written, nicely organized document. > > > > Major issues: > > > > Minor issues: > > > > 1. The tables in Sections 7.6, 7.7, 7.8 state that all undefined values > in the > > registries start immediately after the values defined by this document > with > > 'Reserved for Private and Experimental Use'. What about future > extensions in > > future versions of the document? Would not it be better to leave a range > for > > future extensions and start the values for private and experimental use > farther > > in the total spaces? > > We are not sure what you mean - we believe that the tables say that the > upper halves of the spaces are 'Reserved for Private and Experimental Use’, > while the lower halves are unallocated except for those values that are > specified in the draft. > > Do you have an example of how you would want it to be written/formatted > instead? > It would be more clear if you added in the table in Section 7.6 for example: 8 - 16383 - Reserved for Future Standard Use > > Nits/editorial comments: > > > > 1. In the (very useful) Appendix A for Terms and Abbreviations, there > are a few > > abbreviations usually considered part of the shared basis terms in IETF > > documents (like TCP, UDP, IANA, ...) > > Ok - Marcus is doing that right now. > > Best regards, > > Ragnar > >
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