I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology-13 Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour Review Date: 2020-05-26 IETF LC End Date: 2020-05-25 IESG Telechat date: NA Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but I have some comments. Major issues: Minor issues: Is it possible to add in the abstract and or intro where the info of the topology information is to be used? Maybe borrowing some text from RFC8345. Nits/editorial comments: [Page 21], Section 6, "NMDA-complient"---->"NMDA-compliant" Best Regards, Meral --- Meral Shirazipour Ericsson Research www.ericsson.com
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