Hi Paul, Many thanks for your review. I will update the next version with the nits. Thanks Bala'zs
-----Original Message----- From: Paul Kyzivat <pkyzi...@alum.mit.edu> Sent: Wednesday, February 3, 2021 6:20 PM To: draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-tsn....@ietf.org Cc: General Area Review Team <gen-art@ietf.org> Subject: Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-tsn-05 I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-detnet-ip-over-tsn-05 Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat Review Date: 2021-02-05 IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-05 IESG Telechat date: ? Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be fixed before publication. General: I'm unqualified to meaningfully comment on the technical quality of this document. I've reviewed it for form. Issues: Major: 0 Minor: 0 Nits: 2 1) NIT: Unlinked references In section 1 paragraph 2, and section 3 paragraph 1, there are references to [RFC8939] that are not linked. 2) NIT: From IdNits IdNits reports: == Outdated reference: A later version (-14) exists of draft-ietf-detnet-security-12 There are a couple of other warnings, but they are spurious. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
