Dan - I put the assignment back into accepted manually.
Sent from my iPhone > On Jun 17, 2021, at 3:44 AM, Dan Romascanu <droma...@gmail.com> wrote: > > > Hi, > > Due to a system glitch I cannot enter my reviews via the tool. Until this is > fixed, here are my early comments to draft-ietf-6man-grand, which was > assigned to me. > > Version Reviewed - 04 > State: Ready with Editorial Comments > > This is a very well written document. I appreciate the section describing the > other Solutions Considered, which is a good guidance and reference for future > discussions and extensions. > > I have two editorial comments only: > > 1. In Section 3 the Normative Language with capitalizations is used to > describe requirements from solutions. This seems quite unnecessary, and > certainly cannot be verified for conformance. > 2. I would suggest moving or copying the first sentence in Section 6 (that > says that all normative text in the memo can be found in this section) in the > Introduction section. > > Thanks and regards, > > Dan > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
