Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-lamps-samples-05 Reviewer: Stewart Bryant Review Date: 2021-11-16 IETF LC End Date: 2021-11-26 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: A well written document ready for publication Major issues:None Minor issues:None Nits/editorial comments: The following terms were used without prior definition in the text: PEM, OCSP, CRL - they are well known in the security community, but not in the RFC Editor list of well known terms not needing expansion on first use. Sections 11 and 12 have no content and can be removed. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
