Stewart, thank you for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot for this document.
Lars > On 2022-4-28, at 20:20, Stewart Bryant via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> > wrote: > > Reviewer: Stewart Bryant > Review result: Ready with Issues > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-sidrops-8210bis-06 > Reviewer: Stewart Bryant > Review Date: 2022-04-28 > IETF LC End Date: 2022-04-29 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: I read this from a GenArt perspective rather than a routing > perspective, and from that viewpoint the only issues that need addressing are > the matter of the obsolete RFCs that are called up without reference to their > status and any necessary mitigations. Once this matter is addressed the draft > is ready for publication. > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: > ====== > Nits fulls up three errors: > > ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 2385 (Obsoleted by RFC 5925) > ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 5246 (Obsoleted by RFC 8446) > ** Obsolete normative reference: RFC 8208 (Obsoleted by RFC 8608) > > The first is covered by an explanation in the text of the draft, but the other > two are not. > > I am not sure what the right what the technology and deployment issues are in > moving the the newer RFCs, but there is not text as far as I can see noting > the > obsolete nature of RFC5246 or RFC8208, nor any comment on their replacement by > RFC8446 and RFC8608 respectively. > ====== > > Nits/editorial comments: None > > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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