Peter, thank you for your review. I have entered a Discuss ballot (on behalf of IANA) for this document.
Lars > On 2022-7-8, at 21:23, Peter Yee via Datatracker <nore...@ietf.org> wrote: > > Reviewer: Peter Yee > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. > > Document: draft-ietf-add-svcb-dns-06 > Reviewer: Peter Yee > Review Date: 2022-07-08 > IETF LC End Date: 2022-07-08 > IESG Telechat date: 2022-07-14 > > Summary: This document specifies how SVCB can be used for named DNS servers, > including ones that use any of DoH, DoT, and DoQ. There are nits that should > be > fixed prior to publication. I really have no complaints about this document > and > am not repeating any points that have been made in prior reviews. [Ready with > Nits] > > Major issues: None > > Minor issues: None > > Nits/editorial comments: > > General: > > Perhaps change the two occurrences of "a SVCB" to "an SVCB" on the assumption > that "SVCB" is read as ess-vee-cee-bee. > > Specific: > > Page 5, 1st bullet item, insert "to" between "trusts" and "not". Or place the > "to" after "not". > > > _______________________________________________ > Gen-art mailing list > Gen-art@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art
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