Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review result: Ready I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-httpapi-rfc7807bis-04 Reviewer: Pete Resnick Review Date: 2022-10-27 IETF LC End Date: 2022-11-03 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: Ready to go; one comment below. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: This paragraph in section 4 struck me oddly: An extension member (see Section 3.2) MAY occur in the Problem field if its name is compatible with the syntax of Dictionary keys (see Section 3.2 of [STRUCTURED-FIELDS]) and if the defining problem type specifies a Structured Type to serialize the value into. That almost sounds like what you want to say is: If an extension member (see Section 3.2) occurs in the Problem field, its name MUST be compatible with the syntax of Dictionary keys (see Section 3.2 of [STRUCTURED-FIELDS]) and the defining problem type MUST specify a Structured Type to serialize the value into. I'm curious if you are making a normative statement that would get lost in the current form. But I'm not sure what the high-order bit here is, so I leave it to you. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list Gen-art@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/gen-art