Thanks Jean for the response and for addressing my comments. Regards,
Dan On Mon, Nov 28, 2022 at 12:31 PM Jean Quilbeuf <jean.quilb...@huawei.com> wrote: > Hello Dan, > Thanks for the review, you’ll find our answers inline. > > The full diff is here: > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-yang-10 > > Best, > Jean > > > -----Original Message----- > > From: Dan Romascanu via Datatracker [mailto:nore...@ietf.org] > > Sent: Monday 14 November 2022 19:36 > > To: gen-art@ietf.org > > Cc: draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-yang....@ietf.org; > last-c...@ietf.org; > > ops...@ietf.org; droma...@gmail.com > > Subject: Genart last call review of > draft-ietf-opsawg-service-assurance-yang- > > 09 > > > 1. A number of acronyms need expanding at first occurrence: SAIN, TCAM, > > ECMP. > > May be more. > > Thanks, I did a pass and this should be fixed. > > > 2. Section 2: > > > > > The third YANG module, "ietf-service-assurance-interface" > > (Section 5), is another example that augments the "ietf-service- > > assurance" module, by adding support for the interface subservice. > > > > Why is this called 'another example'. If this is an example (of what?), > should > > not the module in Section 5 be named as such? > > > > Rephrased: > "The third YANG module, "ietf-service-assurance-interface" > (Section 6), is another example that augments the "ietf-service- > assurance" module, by adding support for the interface subservice." > > > 3. In section 3.3: > > > > > type yang:date-and-time; > > description > > "Date and time at which the symptom stopped being detected. > > must after the start-date-time."; > > > > s/must after the start-date-time/must be after the start-date-time/ > > > > > > Fixed thanks. > >
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