Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.
For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-bmwg-benchmarking-stateful-06 Reviewer: Robert Sparks Review Date: 2024-05-22 IETF LC End Date: 2024-05-22 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: Ready for publication as an Informational RFC with nits Nits/editorial comments: There are places in the text that say "The authors are aware" - the construction seems out of place for a consensus IETF stream document - I'm not sure if this was the resolution of an argument, or just text that could be further changed to "Note that" or something similar. I support the concerns Michael raised in his tsvart review. Please consider reaching out to the RFC-Editor early for how to best represent the small block of pseudocode in the xml for the document. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list -- gen-art@ietf.org To unsubscribe send an email to gen-art-le...@ietf.org
