+gen-art.
Something in the way the directorate review was done confuses the reply-to-all 
feature.  See also prior reply to the list.

-- Jeff


> Begin forwarded message:
> 
> From: Jeffrey Haas <[email protected]>
> Subject: Re: draft-ietf-bfd-secure-sequence-numbers-22 ietf last call Genart 
> review
> Date: August 16, 2025 at 11:25:24 AM EDT
> To: "rtg-bfd@ietf. org" <[email protected]>
> 
> Mallory,
> 
> 
>> On Aug 14, 2025, at 12:22 PM, Jeffrey Haas <[email protected]> wrote:
>> On 8/14/25 10:40, Mallory Knodel via Datatracker wrote:
>>> It seems that the nomenclature should be somewhat patterned in format
>>> everywhere consistently thusly:
>> Too many hands on the diff.  These are details where the RFC editor is 
>> capable of normalizing things.  But since edits need to happen, some work 
>> can happen prior to that.
> 
> I reviewed the uses of the various instance of Meticulous Keyed ISAAC.  The 
> majority were appropriate for their usage. I corrected at least one 
> inconsistency in case and one inappropriate form.
> 
> I'd suggest leaving the remaining items to the RFC editor.
> 
>> Perhaps sections 5 and 6 could be stated as "BFD authentication procedures 
>> when using XXX formats"?
> 
> This was done.
> 
> -23 covers the addressable items from your review.  Thanks.
> 
> -- Jeff

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