Hi Thomas, Thank you for the review. Please see changes below.
Joe > On Aug 12, 2025, at 7:34 AM, Thomas Fossati via Datatracker > <[email protected]> wrote: > > Document: draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5273bis > Title: Certificate Management over CMS (CMC): Transport Protocols > Reviewer: Thomas Fossati > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. > > Document: draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5273bis-06 > Reviewer: Thomas Fossati > Review Date: 2025-08-12 > IETF LC End Date: 2025-08-25 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: > > The document is straightforward, concise, and well written. > > Major issues: > > none > > Minor issues: > > none > > Nits/editorial comments: > > # Sections 6.1 and 6.2 > >> The Content-Type header MUST have the appropriate value from Table 2. > > Unsure whether the “SMIME Type” parameter is used or if it’s inferred from the > request/response context. I’d say the former, but maybe better avoid any > potential ambiguity. We added an example to the text. See: https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-lamps-rfc5273bis-08 > > # Section 7 > >> The title of this IP Protocol number is "pkix-cmc”. > > ‘title of this IP Protocol number’ sounds odd. Perhaps: ‘The Service Name is > “pkix-cmc”.’ as per the associated IANA ports entry [1]. > > [1] > https://www.iana.org/assignments/service-names-port-numbers/service-names-port-numbers.xhtml?search=5318 We agree and made the change. > # Section 10.1 and 10.2 > > * Why is IPsec normative? > * Why is BCP195 normative but TLS is only informative? Thank you, we changed IPsec to informative as it is not required.
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