Hi Behcet, Thank you for your review. I believe that draft-ietf-suit-report-15 resolves the bulk of the nits/editorial comments that you raised. In particular, we have addressed the typos, the COSE definition, the reference to RFC9019, and Russ's secdir review. However, we have not removed sections 9.2-9.8. These have been left in to support the registrations that have been requested of IANA.
Best Regards, Brendan On Fri, Aug 8, 2025 at 5:13 PM Behcet Sarikaya via Datatracker <[email protected]> wrote: > > Document: draft-ietf-suit-report > Title: Secure Reporting of Update Status > Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya > Review result: Not Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. > > Document: draft-ietf-suit-report-14 > Reviewer: Behcet Sarikaya > Review Date: 2025-08-08 > IETF LC End Date: 2025-08-11 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: > The draft is about updating firmware of IoT devices, it defines a logging > container which creates a lightweight feedback mechanism for developers in the > event > that an update or boot fails in the manifest processor. The container is > defined in CDDL format. > Major issues: > N/A > Minor issues: > Yes. > Nits/editorial comments: > Sec. 3 includded -> included > Sec. 4 decisiosn -> decisions > Sec. 4.2 an unusupported COSE COSE undefined > As I write this I discovered another typo unusupported -> unsupported > Section 9. > Media types issue: I think that sections 9.2 - 9.8 can be omitted > Sec. 10. I suggest checking Ross' secdir review > > I think that RFC 9019 is very informative and useful in reading this draft but > I could not see a reference to RFC 9019. > > > _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
