Document: draft-ietf-ippm-asymmetrical-pkts Title: Performance Measurement with Asymmetrical Traffic Using Simple Two-Way Active Measurement Protocol (STAMP) Reviewer: Christer Holmberg Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-ippm-asymmetrical-pkts-10 Reviewer: Christer Holmberg Review Date: 2026-02-11 IETF LC End Date: 2026-02-18 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary: The document is well written, and easy to understand. I only have a couple of editorial comments that I would like the authors to address. Major issues: N/A Minor issues: N/A Nits/editorial comments: Q1: The Abstract is far too long. I think it would be enough with something like: "This document specifies an optional extension to the Simple Two-way Active Measurement Protocol (STAMP) to control the length and/or number of packets sent by a Session-Reflector in response to a single test packet from the Session-Sender during a STAMP test session. This supports cases where a Session-Reflector responding with Asymmetrical Packets would ensure a closer approximation between active performance measurements and the conditions experienced by monitored application." Q2: In the Introduction, I suggest to put the current 1st chapter to the end. First describe what the draft does, and then how it does it. _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
