Hi Sue, Thank you so much for the review and the specific feedback, we looked at the paragraph and decided the sentence you referred to added no useful information anyway, so addressed the issue by removing it - exact changes for anyone interested is in Pull #63: https://github.com/ietf-wg-spice/draft-ietf-spice-glue-id/pull/63.
Thanks! Pamela ________________________________ From: Sue Hares via Datatracker <[email protected]> Sent: Thursday, February 12, 2026 11:52 AM To: [email protected] <[email protected]> Cc: [email protected] <[email protected]>; [email protected] <[email protected]>; [email protected] <[email protected]> Subject: [EXTERNAL] draft-ietf-spice-glue-id-04 ietf last call Genart review Document: draft-ietf-spice-glue-id Title: GLobal Unique Enterprise (GLUE) Identifiers Reviewer: Sue Hares Review result: Ready with Nits I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://nam06.safelinks.protection.outlook.com/?url=https%3A%2F%2Fwiki.ietf.org%2Fen%2Fgroup%2Fgen%2FGenArtFAQ&data=05%7C02%7Cpamela.dingle%40microsoft.com%7Ce4aef38cba6f45f16e1608de6a703c38%7C72f988bf86f141af91ab2d7cd011db47%7C1%7C0%7C639065227453173896%7CUnknown%7CTWFpbGZsb3d8eyJFbXB0eU1hcGkiOnRydWUsIlYiOiIwLjAuMDAwMCIsIlAiOiJXaW4zMiIsIkFOIjoiTWFpbCIsIldUIjoyfQ%3D%3D%7C0%7C%7C%7C&sdata=Ko6jgq39QVrdFcvXGo0oO5P76AgoXsw5BdkWQdkzT6w%3D&reserved=0<https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>>. Document: draft-ietf-spice-glue-id-04 Reviewer: Sue Hares Review Date: 2026-02-12 IETF LC End Date: 2026-02-10 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Summary:Ready wiht Nits Major issues: none Minor issues: none Nits/editorial comments: 1. NIT 1 - section 7, paragraph 1, sentence 2, Editorial. Old text/ The following registration procedure is used for the registry established by this specification./ The sentence does not make it clear what paragraphs and/or sections are procedures and what sections populate the defined registries with values. J
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