Thanks Vijay, the next version will include this change. I may use parentheses instead of em dashes, for reasons you can probably guess :)
On Thu, 30 Apr 2026, at 20:23, Vijay Gurbani via Datatracker wrote: > Document: draft-ietf-regext-rdap-ttl-extension > Title: RDAP Extension for DNS Time-To-Live (TTL Values) > Reviewer: Vijay Gurbani > Review result: Ready > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area > Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed > by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just > like any other last call comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. > > Document: draft-ietf-regext-rdap-ttl-extension-?? > Reviewer: Vijay K. Gurbani > Review Date: 2026-04-30 > IETF LC End Date: 2026-05-13 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: This I-D is ready for publication as a Proposed Standard. > > Major issues: 0 > > Minor issues: 0 > > Nits/editorial comments: 1 > > Nits: > 1. Introduction: too many commas in "Inclusion of these values in RDAP > responses, in addition to nameservers, glue IP addresses, and DS records, > allows out-of-band debugging of the DNS configuration oftroublesome domain > names.". Perhaps this rewrite suffices: "Inclusion of these values in RDAP > responses --- in addition to nameservers, glue IP addresses, and DS records > --- > allows out-of-band debugging of the DNS configuration of troublesome domain > names." > > Thanks, > > - vijay > > > > _______________________________________________ > regext mailing list -- [email protected] > To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected] _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
