Hi Aijun, Thanks, I have no other comments Roni
On Fri, 3 Jul 2026 at 9:49 Aijun Wang <[email protected]> wrote: > Hi, Roni: > > Thanks for your review. > I have updated the draft and will be updated later, together with other > comment. > > Please see the detail replies inline below. > > Aijun > > -----Original Message----- > From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] > On Behalf Of Roni Even via Datatracker > Sent: Thursday, July 2, 2026 12:51 PM > To: [email protected] > Cc: [email protected]; [email protected]; > [email protected] > Subject: [Idr] draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-inter-as-topology-ext-35 ietf last > call Genart review > > Document: draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-inter-as-topology-ext > Title: BGP-LS Extension for Inter-AS Topology Retrieval > Reviewer: Roni Even > Review result: Ready with Nits > > I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review > Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for > the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call > comments. > > For more information, please see the FAQ at > > <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. > > Document: draft-ietf-idr-bgpls-inter-as-topology-ext-??9 > Reviewer: Roni Even > Review Date: 2026-07-01 > IETF LC End Date: 2026-07-07 > IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat > > Summary: > The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with minor > nits > [WAJ] Thanks！ > > > Major issues: > > Minor issues: > > Nits/editorial comments: > > In section 5 second paragraph seesection 11) should be see (section 11) > [WAJ] Have updated. > > In section 4 second paragraph the use of the word “among” probably mean > inside or internal > [WAJ] There are two "among" in this section. I replace the first 'among' > with 'within', and second 'among' with 'between', to describe the > IGP-internal information and IGP-between information respectively. > > _______________________________________________ > Idr mailing list -- [email protected] > To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected] > >
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