Document: draft-ietf-ianabis-early-registries Title: Early IANA Registry Creation Reviewer: Mallory Knodel Review result: Ready with Nits
I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <https://wiki.ietf.org/en/group/gen/GenArtFAQ>. Document: draft-ietf-ianabis-early-registries-?? Reviewer: Mallory Knodel Review Date: 2026-09-01 IETF LC End Date: 2026-09-10 IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat Minor issues: * 7120bis is more explicit for an expired allocation: deprecate, de-allocate, or leave it as expired. This draft could use analogous language. * In places I am reading "registry creation" and "registry allocation." I think they are different. But if they are not different, the language needs harmonizing. Another option is to acknowledge their interchangeability. Nits/editorial comments: In 5.5.: "will be be considered" _______________________________________________ Gen-art mailing list -- [email protected] To unsubscribe send an email to [email protected]
