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Document: draft-ietf-satp-architecture-10
Reviewer: Paul Kyzivat
Review Date: 2026-09-30
IETF LC End Date: 2026-10-07
IESG Telechat date: TBD
Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits
that should be fixed before publication.
Major issues: None.
Minor issues: None.
Nits:
I was surprised that a document at this level of abstraction singled out
TLS1.3 as the mandatory protocol for the secure asset transfer protocol.
Wouldn't other secure protocols (like QUIC) also suffice? Of course
eventually one or a few must be chosen, but the architecture doc seems
the wrong place for that. Seems like it would be more appropriate for
the CORE document.
Otherwise, aside from a few typos, this document seems good to go.
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