Author: hboutemy
Date: Sat Feb 17 16:04:52 2024
New Revision: 1915828

URL: http://svn.apache.org/viewvc?rev=1915828&view=rev
Log:
move Whimsy instructions to resolution details

Modified:
    attic/site/xdocs/index.xml
    attic/site/xdocs/resolution.xml

Modified: attic/site/xdocs/index.xml
URL: 
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/attic/site/xdocs/index.xml?rev=1915828&r1=1915827&r2=1915828&view=diff
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--- attic/site/xdocs/index.xml (original)
+++ attic/site/xdocs/index.xml Sat Feb 17 16:04:52 2024
@@ -61,14 +61,9 @@
      Project Management Committee (PMC) decides it would like to move the 
project, or The 
      Apache Software Foundation's board dissolves the PMC and chooses to move 
the project. </p>
 
-  <p>Whimsy provides a tool to add a suitable resolution to the next board 
agenda:</p>
-  <ul>
-  <li>Go to https://whimsy.apache.org/board/agenda/</li>
-  <li>Select the 'add item' button at the bottom</li>
-  <li>Select the 'Terminate Project' button from the list</li>
-  <li>Enter the project details</li>
-  </ul>
-  <p>Alternatively, the following may be useful: <a 
href="resolution.html">Template Board Resolution</a>. </p>
+  <p>First step is to add a suitable resolution to the next board agenda: see 
the <a href="resolution.html">Template Board Resolution</a>.</p>
+
+  <p>Once the submitted resolution has been approved during a board meeting, 
the Attic project starts executing the move.</p>
 </section>
 
 <section id="candidates">
@@ -81,7 +76,7 @@
 <section id="process">
   <title>Process of moving into the Attic</title>
 
-  <p>This is defined in the separate <a href="process.html">process</a> 
document. </p>
+  <p>This is defined in greater details in the separate <a 
href="process.html">process</a> document. </p>
 
 </section>
 

Modified: attic/site/xdocs/resolution.xml
URL: 
http://svn.apache.org/viewvc/attic/site/xdocs/resolution.xml?rev=1915828&r1=1915827&r2=1915828&view=diff
==============================================================================
--- attic/site/xdocs/resolution.xml (original)
+++ attic/site/xdocs/resolution.xml Sat Feb 17 16:04:52 2024
@@ -28,8 +28,8 @@
   <title>Board Resolution to move to the Attic</title>
 
   <p>The following is a sample resolution to move a project to the Apache 
Attic. A project's 
-     chair should include this in the agenda for the next board meeting. </p>
-
+     chair should include this in the agenda for the next board meeting: </p>
+  
   <pre>
    ?.  Terminate the Apache {PROJECT} Project
 
@@ -54,6 +54,16 @@
        RESOLVED, that the Apache {PROJECT} PMC is hereby terminated.
   </pre>
 
+  <p>Whimsy provides a tool to easily add such a resolution to the next board 
agenda:</p>
+  <ul>
+    <li>Go to <a href="https://whimsy.apache.org/board/agenda/";>Whimsy Board 
Agenda</a> tool</li>
+    <li>Select the 'add item' button at the bottom</li>
+    <li>Select the 'Terminate Project' button from the list</li>
+    <li>Enter the project details</li>
+  </ul>
+
+  <p>See <a href="process.hmtl">Attic process</a> for more details on the 
process before adding the resolution to the board agenda. </p>
+
 </section>
 
 </body>


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